Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
hi its me, Tane on your blog again, sorry to be the bringer of bad news but maybe you should put in more punctuation in and maybe you should change the part where you say "someone was burning" to "something was burning". just a thought though.��
Kia ora Hayden my name is Calais in Te Ngahere. I really like your blog post because you have added lots of detail, Like letting us know what you did in the morning, and what your cousins were doing like running around the house. This reminds me of when I woke up a with my dad just playing loud music and my sibling running around the house. I hope you have had a awesome day, blog you later.
Kia Ora Hayden, Its Hunter from Ahipara school. I think your show don't tell was really cool and very dispritive. But maybe next time you could have multiple slides? Ka pai.
Kia ora Hayden my name is Calais in Te Ngahere. I really like your blog post because you have added lots of detail, about letting us know what you did in the morning, and what your cousins were doing like running around the house. This reminds me of when I woke up a with my dad just playing loud music and my sibling running around the house and yelling. I hope you have had a awesome day, blog you later.
g'day heyden keep up the good work and have a nice day
ReplyDeleteThanks William for the comment.
Deletehi its me, Tane on your blog again, sorry to be the bringer of bad news but maybe you should put in more punctuation in and maybe you should change the part where you say "someone was burning" to "something was burning". just a thought though.��
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hayden my name is Calais in Te Ngahere. I really like your blog post because you have added lots of detail, Like letting us know what you did in the morning, and what your cousins were doing like running around the house. This reminds me of when I woke up a with my dad just playing loud music and my sibling running around the house. I hope you have had a awesome day, blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHow long where your cousins running around?
Kia Ora Hayden,
ReplyDeleteIts Hunter from Ahipara school. I think your show don't tell was really cool and very dispritive. But maybe next time you could have multiple slides? Ka pai.
Kia ora Hayden my name is Calais in Te Ngahere. I really like your blog post because you have added lots of detail, about letting us know what you did in the morning, and what your cousins were doing like running around the house. This reminds me of when I woke up a with my dad just playing loud music and my sibling running around the house and yelling. I hope you have had a awesome day, blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHow long where your cousins running around?