Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Hayden, Congrats on all the prizes you won on Ag day, you obviously put in a lot of effort into your creations. Your biscuit looks yummy, your potato character is super cute and your Orca drawing looks very detailed. I also think your whakataukī and face are cool and your pet video of Kacey was well done. Maybe you could proofread your blurb for punctuation. Mahi tika ana - Great work! Ms Peters.
Kia ora Hayden,
ReplyDeleteCongrats on all the prizes you won on Ag day, you obviously put in a lot of effort into your creations. Your biscuit looks yummy, your potato character is super cute and your Orca drawing looks very detailed. I also think your whakataukī and face are cool and your pet video of Kacey was well done. Maybe you could proofread your blurb for punctuation. Mahi tika ana - Great work! Ms Peters.