Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Blurb: Yesterday we had a person called Whaea Nancy coming in. She talked to us about Water Safety. We learned stuff like what to do when you are in the ocean and what to do when you are in a rip.
Reflection: I enjoyed our session with her and I found it challenging to remember everything to include for this blog post.
Kia ora Hayden, I like how you created a blog post about Water Safety with Whaea Nancy and how you included a title, Wala, Blurb, Reflection and Photo, tino pai. Maybe next time you could either use voice type or write your ideas down to help you complete your blog post quicker. Either of these suggestions may help you remember what happened, while it's still fresh in your memory? Kia kaha! Ma te wa, Ms Peters.
Kia ora Hayden, it´s Cullen. I liked how you said what you enjoyed. Maybe next time you can put what you learned. Blog ya later.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Cullen, thank you for your comment but I am confused because I did put what I learned about. Blog ya later.
DeleteKia ora Hayden, I like how you created a blog post about Water Safety with Whaea Nancy and how you included a title, Wala, Blurb, Reflection and Photo, tino pai. Maybe next time you could either use voice type or write your ideas down to help you complete your blog post quicker. Either of these suggestions may help you remember what happened, while it's still fresh in your memory? Kia kaha! Ma te wa, Ms Peters.
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